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Chronivac Version 4.0

Punishment for Tom

added 5 years ago O Mental

John aimed the emitter at Tom and clicked the button. Tom smacked at his head absently thinking a mosquito was buzzing around his head but that was just the preset mental changes working their way in.

His personality was left mostly in tact with the exception of 3 minor alterations. 1) Tom was now an emotional eater with Crisco as his food of choice. 2) All physical activity was now thought of as a chore and chores aren't fun. 3) Appearances aren't important.

John couldn't wait to see how those three changes would ensure that Tom would never have to be small nor skinny, seeing how he disliked them so much.

It was quite the rush to see Tom who was so animated a moment ago seem so forlorn and dragging his feet in his favorite class, gym. He was still built like a tank and was committed to the football team so it will be interesting to see how quickly the changes become obvious. (Being committed to something you now hate would have to be quite frustrating.)


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