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Chronivac Version 4.0

Testing the Chronivac

added by johnbohnrevenge 18 years ago O

Megan clicked on Will, and a small window popped up. She quickly looked at it, noticing it gave Will's age, gender, and showed exactly what he looked like from all sides. She found a button that said "Pause", and clicked on it.

Onscreen, Will stopped moving.

"It's not real," said Megan to herself, not wanting to raise any hopes. She walked out of the room and over to where Will was. When she got there, she stopped dead in her tracks. There in front of her was her boyfriend in midstride, not moving, not even breathing. She ran over to his body and felt it. It felt warm like it always did, but he wasn't moving. She ran back to the room with the Chronivac, and tried to organize her thoughts.

"It worked. It worked. This thing is for real." She clicked on a few buttons and managed to make the Chronivac teleport Will into the same room as her. She switched on the button labeled "Body can move".

Will's body crumpled face first onto the office floor.

"What?" said Megan, who then realised that he was still totally unconscious. "This Chronivac could prove to be very worthwhile."


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