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Saved by the Ghost

added by Unnamed 3 years ago O Ghost

Alex was about to enter the place through a crack in the fence, when out of nowhere another kid appeared in front of her screaming "DON'T!"

Said child seemed to be around the same age as Alex currently was. She couldn't determine if it was a girl or a boy, not that Alex herself had anything to say about that one. But it wasn't what suprised the young girl. No, it was the fact that other kid seemed to be slightly see-through.

Before the ethereal being could be asked if it actually was a ghost, it moved its arm like it was grabbing the far away ball, then mimed sending it above the fence. Sure enough, the ball was seen passing above the fence and falling not far from Teddy and the Rodriguez boys".

Alex was about to thank the mysterious kid-looking being but, again, was interrupted. This time, it was by two more ghosts, those looking like monstrous caricatures of adults, a man and a woman, who seemed full of rage. Nobody could understand all they were saying, just that it was something about being denied their vengeance.

"WHAT vengeance?!? Screamed the kid-ghost in in response, "Whoever killed you two is long dead! I was just an innocent kid who wanted ball back, and because of you I died and became trapped here with two sicko! It was so long ago I'm not sure if I was a boy or a girl! All y remember is some distant voice calling me ‘Lou’…"

Sensing Lou loosing steam, the two other ghost seem ready to renew their attack. Desperate to help back the one that probably saved her live, Alex pass her arm through the hole in the fence and scream "Lou, take my hand!"


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