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Chronivac Version 4.0

Down the proverbial river

added 3 years ago BM I

Despite the numerous bodily sounds surrounding Jeff, he was barely able to make out the conversation occurring outside.

"Hey Layla, I think you did pretty well in that meeting," Jeff heard his mom say.

"Um.. thanks. I was really nervous back there, but somehow I made it through. Wish the meeting wasn't that long, but it was with an important client, so I guess it can't be helped," replied a voice that Jeff recognized as Layla, one of his mom's colleagues and best friends. Jeff only met Layla once back at a house party during the holidays, but he recalled that she was a fairly young blonde with a hot, shapely body. Unfortunately, that information wasn't too useful right now, as Jeff was stuck inside her, and not the way he first imagined in his fantasies.

"Ugh.." he heard Layla moan as she rubbed her belly, slightly contorting Jeff's form. "I think I have a stomachache. You guys can head to the lobby first."

"Are you all right, Layla? Need me to walk you to the bathroom? I had the same problem back during the meeting, actually, but a trip to the ladies' room did the trick." his mom replied. Despite the joking tone at the end, her voice had a hint of worry.

"It's fine, Laura. I tend to get those when I get nervous. I just need to sit down for a bit and it will go away on its own. Just go on ahead without me. Just tell the others I'll catch up soon enough."

"If you say so. But text me if you feel any worse, ok?"

"Sure."

The ensuing silence must mean that Jeff's mom left the vicinity, leaving Layla alone with Jeff. At first, Jeff was wondering if his presence was causing Layla discomfort, but apparently, this was a regular occurrence for Layla. However, it didn't take long for Jeff to understand what she meant. Within the 'dark cavern', he noticed that he was moving along quite quickly. Actually, flowing would a better term here, as Jeff felt that he was more like a slurry than a packed solid like he was while in his mom's intestines.

Jeff was worried that he might need to experience another evacuation just moments after his last, and this one might be messier. However, he quickly realize another issue as he began to feel lightheaded. He felt his 'entity' fracturing as his liquid absorbs other substances within the colon. It was like his limbs were ripping apart in multiple directions, if he even had limbs.

"Oww.. I know this happens very often to me, but for some reason, it feels worse today," he heard Layla complain.

Soon after, Jeff thought he heard another voice, this one not from Layla though. "Subject state unstable. Reverting back to origin," the voice rang in Jeff's mind.

"Chronivac?" Jeff responded before his vision turned to a hazy black once more.


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