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Makeover Continues

added by AliasX A year ago AR BM Kid

The cumulative result of the changes was startling. Ted objectively knew Amy was still 16, but now she barely looked old enough for middle school. Of course there were still indications she wasn't especially young like how the child t shirt was pushed out by her small breasts. Smirking he loaded up a new sentence.

*The mother is asking Amy about her straight teeth.*

**The mother is asking Amy about her baby teeth.**

Ted listened curiously as Amy went from explaining how she had just gotten out of braces to explaining that due to a condition her adult teeth never emerged. This left Amy's jaw and face smaller and more rounded. Interesting in pushing further Ted loaded the next sentence.

*Amy's name tag sat on top of her small chest.*

**Amy's name tag sat on top of her flat chest.**

Just like that Amy's shirt was hanging loosely around her torso. From the waist up perspective Amy had no indication she was older than elementary school age, but Ted wasn't fully satisfied. The next sentence read: Amy's leggings fit snugly against her developed lower extremities.

*Amy's leggings fit snugly against her underdeveloped lower extremities.*

And that did it. With her narrow hips, flat butt, and skinny legs, Amy showed no visible sign of her true age. When she finally finished signing the woman's daughter in, Amy climbed down from her seat and took the girl's hand to lead her over to where the children were playing. But rather than looking like a daycare worker guiding a charge, it looked every bit like one little girl leading another.


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