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You experiment with gradual changes

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Author's Note: Sorry for the triple post. Website crashed.

Once Josh had left the room, my calm facade faded and gave way to almost manic excitement. Holy shit! Did all of that really happen?! Did I really transform my roommate from college slob to sexy cowboy? I wanted to scream. I wanted to jump and dance for joy, but I didn't want to make a scene, so, with some hesitation, I calmed myself down.

Phew. Now, after I did that, I became curious about what else this book could do. Immediate changes worked quite well, but would the same thing happen for gradual changes? I quickly opened up the notebook again to write one more line.

"For the next month, whenever Josh works out, I will copy the benefits." I waited for a moment but didn't feel anything happen. Huh, I guess Josh must have not reached the gym yet. Oh, well. I just need to wait for him to reach it, I guess. Although, instead of waiting around, I decided to head out and look for a new test subject.

After leaving my room, I ended up running into my RA. Warren Michales was an art student. He was tall but was quite thin from lack of exercise. Hmmm, I didn't talk to him much, but Warren was nothing but nice and helpful whenever I had a problem or needed something. So instead of completely rewriting him like with Josh, I decided to give Warren a bit of a boost.

"Hey, Warren, how long does it take for you to complete a painting?" I asked. This earned me a raised eyebrow and a look of suspicion from Warren.

"About three days or so, depending on how big the painting is and how busy I am. Why do you ask?" Warren said while still a bit warry, getting asked a random question out of the blue.

"Oh, I was just thinking about getting a commission from someone and just wanted to ask how long it normally would take," I replied. Hopefully, that was convincing enough not to raise any more suspicion. It seemed like it did as Warren just shrugged and went back to his business. After I walked far enough from Warren, I pulled out the notebook again and wrote another sentence.

"For the next month, every time Warren finishes a painting, he will gain 3lbs of muscle." If it takes Warren three days to finish a painting, then he should be able to finish ten paintings this month and gain 30lbs of muscle. Heh, I couldn't wait until this month was over to see how different Warren is going to look.

Speaking of the month, it seemed that Jason had finally reached the gym as I started to feel a strange warm feeling wash over me. I was confused at first until I realized that Josh must have started working out, and I was copying the benefits. Ooh, from the slight burning sensation, it seemed like Josh was working out hard. It wouldn't be long until I had a beach-ready body, it seems.

Yes, it seemed like my experiment was a success. On to the next sentence.


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