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The Magic Shop

Zack wants people to like Anya more

added 11 months ago AR AP BM S TG O

The store's door opens and in comes a young couple. The guy, named Zack, comes in first followed by his girlfriend named Anya.
Zack is a fairly tall and athletic guy, 30 years old with slightly tanned skin, green eyes and short dark hair. He's wearing jeans and a graphic tee. Anya on the other hand is a slim, petite girl, 25 with icy blue eyes, fair skin and long black hair. She has a cute face and a nice pair of C cup breasts and overall looks fairly attractive. She migrated to America from Russia a few years ago and her accent reflected this. She is dressed in shiny black leggings, a dark grey halter top and a black satin choker. She has heavy eyeliner, dark lipstick and dark nail polish.

Anya seemed a bit uneasy looking at all the weird objects in the store. Zack takes her hand in his lovingly. "Don't worry Anya it's gonna be fine. I read about this place on the net, supposedly they have a magical photo booth that can turn anyone's life around. Don't you think that sounds amazing?"
Anya sighs feeling annoyed. "Whatever Zack, I'll let you try this on me just so you'll get it out of your system, but I resent you for wanting to change me. It's not my fault people don't like me, I'm perfectly likeable as I am, I'm the perfect girl!"
"Okay... but wouldn't you like it if people thought the same about you, if they liked you more?"
"I guess..."
"Come on, let's at least give this a go, it'll be fun!"
"Okay..." Anya sighs.
"Hey, aren't you at least a bit excited about this? Come on Anya show some enthusiasm!"
"Yay." Anya says flatly and gives him a super fake smile.

Reluctantly Anya pulls the curtain and enters the photo booth in the corner as Zack goes to type something on the console fixed to the outside wall of the booth.

"Just make Anya be naturally more likeable to everybody please." Zack types in his rather vague and highly interpretable request. What he was thinking was phrasing it this way would leave Anya physically the same but maybe just render her somehow more magnetic and charming to people so she would stop being so glum and cynical all the time. The magical machine on the other hand begins to whirr faintly as it works to interpret Zack's request.

After a few seconds a bright flash of light can be seen from behind the curtain and the booth begins printing out the pictures from the slot under the console. Zack picks up the pictures quickly and sees it was a series of 3 headshots of his girlfriend in sequence.
The first photo was just Anya as normal. The second picture looked like a blurry mess. When he sees the third photo Zack raises his eyebrows in surprise. It was still a headshot, sure, and this one was perfectly clear and crisp, however this third photo was... not a photo of Anya but of someone brand new. Does that mean that for people to like her she had to be completely changed into a different person? That's harsh!
"Oh wow, I guess the booth changed Anya's appearance anyway, wow!" Zack thinks. He honestly wanted to feel bad about Anya, she didn't really even want to do this, he pushed her to do it anyway and now she's gone... But he didn't feel that sorry about this, he knew Anya can return after 3 weeks anyway. That's a full 3 weeks time to date and spend with someone new and exciting and that sounds like a load of fun to Zack!

The curtain pulls open and the person who would Anya had become steps out slowly, looking a bit confused. But who did Anya become?


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