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John failed the Goblin's challenge

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"I swear once I get Carrie back safely, I'll kill you little fucker! You damn Goblin!" John yelled at the Goblin and then quickly rushing down the cliff to the grassy field down there to serach for his lover coin, the Goblin laughed "Good luck, if you really love her, you should be able to find her no problem, eh?" He taunted "54 minutes left, work your magic!"

John gritting his teeth as he looking around the grassy field, seraching for a small coin in a field like this might be possible but he's not sure if it is possible in such a short time limited the Goblin gives him. No, he have to find her no matter what, Carrie will not become a coin permanently, he have to make sure that he'll save her, go back to their world and have a happy married life! Carrie, don't worry, I'll save you!!!

But even with a such determined, John soon find that finding a small coin is harder than he expected and there's a few times that he noticed something shiny and grabbed it but what he got wasn't a coin with Carrie's face but instead a coin with the Goblin's face stick out his tongue with a word "WRONG, YOU IDIOT!" written on it. The Goblin probably placed these coins beforehand to make the game even harder. With all of these fake coins around him, John was unable to remember which area he already searched, it almost look the same and all the fake coins didn't help, it confused him. When John heard the Goblin reminding him that he got 20 minutes left, he starting to panic! "Shit! Why!? Why I can't find you!!!"

John decided to changed his tactic, until now, when he find a fake coin, he'll just throwing it away or just placing it back where it was but that only confused him so the other option he can do is pick all the fake coins he can get his hand on and put them all into his bag, John secretly blame himself for not came up with this plan sooner "Oh? Getting smarter now, do we?" The Goblin noticed and decide to taunt John a bit more "Sure, go ahead, you can even have all of those coins as souvenir if you want to!" He winked "But remember, your wife fate will be seal in 15 minutes, hurry boy!"

But even with John came up with a plan picking all of the fake coins, he still unable to find Carrie, instead, his bag now full of the fake coins which making the bag heavy and slow John down even more, he dropped the bag and changed to put the fake coins in his cloth and jean pocket instead "10 minutes left, poor woman, her husband is too stupid to find her"

John want to climb his way back to the Goblin and beat the crap out of him but he don't want to waste any minute he got left now, Carrie first, he can kick this Goblin ass later! Carrie, where are you!?

Soon John's all pockets filled with fake coins, slow him down again, John find a plastic bag, he decided to remove his cloth and john out to regain his speed and use that plastic bag to keep all fake coins instead "Well, you are doing your best but if only you are a bit more smart than this..." The Goblin started but John shut him out with "Shut up!!!" The Goblin grinned "I'm about to give you a little hint but fuck it! You got 3 minutes left!"

John didn't notice that he is now crying while he searching and picking all fake coins, fake after fake, why he can't find a real one!? This is not the honeymoon he planned for!!! No, no, nooo!!!

When the Goblin yelled "1 Minute left!" John also yelled as well "Where are you!?"

The Goblin starting to count down "59...58...57" Shit! This is no good! He can't find her!!! He is about to fail this challenge and his wife will never become human again! "30...29...28" No! We supposed to live happily ever after, aren't they? Why it have to end like this!? "10...9...8" Carrie! I love you! If you are here somewhere, tell me! I want to find you!!! "4..3..2" Please!!! "...1" COME ON!!! "0! Time's up!"

John failed down to his kneel, no, he failed... "Why...?" The Goblin approaching him "Because you're an idiot, that's why, you didn't even think of a possibility for me to still have a coin" He then pulled out a coin with Carrie's face on it from his dirty loincloth "What!?" John gapsed "That's cheating!" The Goblin shaking his head in response "You're not the first couple I played with. I did the same trick to all couples I challenged and you know what? They realized this trick during half way through the game, some guy even impressed me by asking to serach on me right away, but you're just so stupid!" John can't even say a word now "No, that's..." The Goblin sighed "You failed the challenge, you must receive your punishment!" John eyes wide opened "What? A punishment!? Just my wife becomes coin permanently is not enough you sick Goblin!?" He try to get up and punch the Goblin but he lost his balance and fall face down to the ground "Fuck!" John yelled. The Goblin just laughed and say "That's HER punishment for having stupid guy like you but as for YOUR punishment..."


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