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An Unholy Visitation!

“Hehe… I think the church should be my next stop! Hehe… this’ll be fun,” the “boy” decides after a while and starts heading towards the church towers he is able to make out in the distance, deciding to not teleport this time, ‘not that some weak human notices a “human boy” suddenly appearing out of nowhere,’ he thinks to himself, ‘I don’t want to cause a scene… yet!’

When “Luis” arrives at the church he notices that there aren’t many people around, the Demon assumes that most of them were at work, the boy grins, ‘good, no witnesses,’ he thinks to himself, before entering the large building.

After entering the church, “Luis” notices someone in a black robe at the far end of the church standing near the altar, ‘hope it’s the priest,’ the “boy” thinks to himself.

“Excuse me,” the “boy” says as he walks up to the person, “I’m looking for the priest”.

The man, who has a slim figure, short brown hair, brown eyes and seems to be in his mid 30s looks at the boy and right away feels that something does not feel right.

“I’m father Thomas,” the man says, “shouldn’t you be in school, kid?”

“Luis” grins, “hm… maybe I should… maybe I shouldn’t… I don’t care,” he says, “because… I decided that I have no longer need for boring school”.

Father Thomas frowns, “and why is that?”

“Luis” continues to grin, “because… I am NOT a normal child,” he says, “I look like a 10-year-old boy only because I decided to devour the soul of this little boy and take over his life,” and before the priest is even able to make sense of what the “child” has said, the “boy’s” eyes suddenly glow red and father Thomas immediately finds himself unable to move, utter a word and look away.

The “boy” grins wider, “he… that was to easy,” he says, “hehe… looks like the little “followers” of the that loser up there are just as weak as any human. Hehe… you and me are going to have a little… fun. Oh, and don’t worry: no one is able to either enter or leave this building, and no one will hear us! Now, let’s not waste anymore time and get started, so let’s get you out of those clothes!”

“Luis” snaps his fingers and the priest’s robe and clothing, he had worn underneath, vanish, leaving the 35-year-old standing nude in front of the “little boy”, “nice body, hehe,” the Demon says, “looks like you do sports. You’ll make a fine hellhound!”

The “boy” lifts a hand, palm facing upward, as a black orb starts to form, grinning evilly, “Luis” watches as the orb slowly floats towards the priest and sinks into the man’s stomach.

Once the orb has sunken into the man’s body, “Luis” breaks the link by deactivating his hypnotic stare.

Father Thomas blinks for a while, “wh-what happened,” he says, he then feels a draft and looks down, his eyes widening, “WHERE IN HEAVEN’S NAME ARE MY CLOTHES!”

“Luis” laughs, “heaven nor your so called “god” will answer that question,” he says.

The priest looks terrified at the boy, “wh-what do you mean?”

“Luis” grins, “you are no longer a “child of heaven and light”, I think is what you weak humans call yourselves, especially humans who worship “the maker”,” the “boy” says sarcastically, “hehe… soon you will be nothing more than my loyal and obedient little… or rather big… hellhound, who’ll do anything for his master. Haha… you’ll enjoy your new life!”

Father Thomas doesn’t understand anything, he feels so confused, “who… WHAT are you?”

“Luis” smirks, “oh, let’s just say… I am NOT a human… I am something far more powerful,” he says, “and I originally came from down there,” he adds, pointing a finger to the floor.

Father Thomas understands immediately, “n-no… but th-that is not possible,” he says.

“Luis” smirks, “oh, believe me,” he says, “I am 100% real, and let me tell you: hell is one HELL of a boring place! HAHA! Well, now that I have this “earth-made” body, NOTHING: no holy water, no prayers, no holy place… NOTHING can ever stop me! My power is only increasing each second!”

Father Thomas is horrified, the man is unable to find words, then he suddenly feels a pain in his head, “wh-what’s happening… now,” he asks, clutching his head, “it… it feels as if my… brain is on f-fire!”

“Luis” smirks, “that is just your mind being corrupted by the curse I have placed on you,” he says, “soon you will be down on all fours, a happy big black furred beast of hell, wagging his tail when he devours any soul who dares enter this… MY… church! HAHAHA,” with that “Luis” vanishes into thin air, leaving the priest all by himself.

“NOOOO! I DON’T WANT… DON’T WANT TO… BE A HE-HELLHOUND,” the man screams, “I… I’M HUMAN… I’M A HU… GRRRRR,” the priest is quickly overcome by the powerful curse, dropping down onto his hands, growling as black fur sprouts from his body, seeming to be moving in a flame-like way as if the fur is made of black flames, then a tail bursting from his back with the same black flame-like fur, his ears migrating up to the top of his head, his face pushing out into a snarling muzzle filled with sharp and pointy teeth, with a howl the transformation is over and in the church stands a huge wolf-like beast with glowing red eyes.


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