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Cant swim with hooves

added by Clyde 17 years ago A

"Oh man." Tony backs up slowly from his friend, afraid of what is happening to him.

His belly rumbles and squeaks as his insides change, Chris feels like he has the worst stomach ache ever. "Ungh... I think Im gonna barf." Chris leans forward with one arm wrapped around his mid section, placing one hand on the wall to steady himself as he feels a little dizzy.

His long furry tail swishes behind him and his ears swivel in Tony's direction as he looks up.

"I think its going away. Do I look fatter? My stomach is fatter..." Chris is staring at his belly which looks a little swollen, more barrel chested than before he looks down at himself and takes a step forward towards his friend, and stumbles as he feels his feet are different.

He puts one leg up a little to see his feet more clearly, Tony gasps and continues to slowly back away from his friend, terrified of the changes he sees. Chris's foot is turning black, his toenails are growing and merging as his ankles bend and straighten in a new direction. He looks like he is standing on his tip-toes but his toes are gone. With a loud CLOP he puts his hoof down and takes another step. He doesnt notice the tiny short grey fur slowly replacing the chest hair below his belly button and gently creeping up his chest around his pectorals and up his back.

"Well I cant swim with hooves. This HEEEHAW- sucks." He looks up at Tony who is white with fear, his eyes wide as he witnesses his friend changing.

"Think we could escape or find a cure or something before I go all the way? At least promise meEEHAW that you wont leave me behind." Chris reaches a hand out to his friend, a note of sadness in his voice but he is resigned to his fate. He certainly couldnt go outside looking like this, walking was hard enough it would be impossible to try to run away.

The two boys stand in the pool area thinking of what to do next...


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