(re-edited and start of a chapter from years ago)
Brad sat at his desk in his den around 8:30 pm and went through the mail that came that day. In it was a small box address to occupant.
'Great,' he thought 'more AOL.'
But when he opened the box and read the booklet inside, it peaked his curiosity. He installed the program and began to browse the options. The program looked cool, but he really didn't believe it was really going to work, that was scientifically impossible.
'Are you coming to bed or what?!' screeched a voice from the bedroom.
'Yeah yeah,' he replied 'I'll be there in a minute.' Brad called out to his wife 'Bitch.' He said to himself under his breath.
'Hurry up! Don't take all god damn night.' She screeched again. She was bitchy all the time and was getting worse. They had been married 16 years now, and in that time she had really let herself go. She wasn't really skinny when they wed, at a size 8-10, but she was tall and had a nice figure. Now she was like a size 28 maybe bigger he wasn't sure. His 18 year-old beautiful bride was a bitter 34 year old. Along with the weight gain she had lost all her sex drive, and had become a total bitch. If it wasn't for their two daughters, he'd had left her long ago.
'Hurry up!' came another screech. 'I'll be right there.' he replied.
He started the program 'SCANNING' popped up on the screen. A few seconds later a schematic of his house popped up on the screen, what was interesting was in that he showed up on the screen in the room marked den. As did his wife, Tiffany in their bedroom, his 13 year-old daughter Sarah in her own room (talking on the phone), and his 16 year-old daughter Robin downstairs in the living room with one of her friends (Sally) sitting on the couch watching TV. The program must somehow tap into the wireless router, he assured himself (knowing nothing about computers). He selected his daughter and it popped up everything about her body age shape, stuff he really didn't need to know about his daughter. He clicked on her friend the same, popped up The stats on her 16 year-old body were impressive, he clicked the mind button and selected current thoughts, one of them interested him and he smiled. It said she has crush on Robin's dad.
'Cute.' He thought to himself as he then selected his wife. "Ouch." he said out loud, he didn't realize she was that bad. 'I wonder if I can change any of these things?' he thought to himself.