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Still learning this magic stuff

added by razor 17 years ago A

When Jade's transformation seemed to have stopped, Dan flipped through some pages until he found the "tractor-beam" reversal. He cast the spell in the anthro-snail's direction and the green glowing orb slowly faded away. Jade landed with a squish on the grass. She immediately pulled her body into her shell. Dan took one step closer to Jade when he heard a yell from behind him. He didn't have time to turn as Kat came crashing into him like a linebacker. They both fell to the ground and Dan was momentarily dazed. In his surprise, he'd dropped the book on the ground. He sat up just in time to see Kat running away with unnatural speed. The book was gone.

Only then did the situation dawn on him. He had read the correct spell, but instead of only freeing Jade, the spell freed all three girls. and now Dan's spell casting sister had her book back and a hopeless head start on him. His head swam with the unpleasant scenarios his sister might discover for him in that book. His thoughts wandered until he heard soft sobbing to his left.

He turned and saw a figure kneeling in front of the 3-foot-tall snail. This, of course, was Rachel, who was also freed from her glowing prison. She had her right hand resting lightly on her friend's new shell, while the other wiped tears away from her eyes. Dan could also see Jade's eyes, as her head slowly crept out of her shell. He walked slowly toward the pathetic creature he'd made.

Due to his lack of understanding of magic, the transformation hadn't been complete. Jade nearly retained her full human size, though only her torso remained. Her arms and hands were gone and her legs had fused to a slimy nub sticking out the back of her shell. her large breasts remained on her chest, though the weight of her body and shell pushed them to either side of her slimy pedipod. her face lacked a nose and her mouth had stretched into sort of a conical trunk that projected forward. Dan was taken aback by the eyes. They were the same deep brown color they had always been, and they had enlarged to the size of baseballs sitting on the end of fleshy stalks. Looking down into her eyes and seeing the very human pain and fear in them, he took no joy in his revenge.

He was lost in Jade's eyes and didn't hear Rachel rise to her feet beside him. She turned to Dan and...


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