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Ride to a whole new world

added 17 years ago A AR S

You slowly descend, softly moving about on your thin hooves until you're pretty close to him. You wait for him to notice you, and there you stand; tail waving and waiting. This person doesn't seem too eager to follow though, as he only approaches very slowly. You let him come all the way to you, and a look of wonderment can be read on his face while he strokes your side fur, as if questioning why you haven't run away from him yet. After a while of him stroking you and you positively responding when he does, it still doesn't seem he's willing to follow. Even though you only have a very frail back as a doe, you're willing to risk it to bring this one in. You turn your ears back and downwards as if he is your master, and you kneel down to let him get on. After a few moments he gets the hint, but is quite puzzled as to why a doe would do this. As soon as he's on your back and holding on tight, you hop up into a sprint, your rider clearly enjoying every moment of it. He closes his eyes and leans his head against the back of your neck.

As you take him deeper into the forest, you can tell his change is starting. His ears stretch wide, and starts develop a cervine muzzle. He doesn't seem too bothered by it, as he's too relaxed to notice the changes at the moment. The brown and cream fur visible on his muzzle has now spread all across his body, creating the distinctive white patch marks of a fawn on his back. He's clearly going to be raised from the start. Fluttering his ears happily, his grip starts to falter when his hands and feet turn to tiny deer hooves, and you slow down to a trot accordingly, so that he doesn't fall off. He finally notices when he can't feel his hands or feet anymore, but it's too late for the moaning fawn wiggling his new legs. To finish things up, a short fluffy deer floomfs out above his butt, immediately flicking along with yours. Soon, the herd comes in sight and you kneel down again to let him off your back, letting him stand on his own hooves for the first time. You helpfully take off what's left of his clothing with your teeth, and for the first time the little one faces his new family...


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