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When Sherry (Carrie) left the room, Jeff strolled to the computer chuckling to himself thinking of the mistake of his mother. Instead of making him unaware, she did it to herself!

"She had never been too good with computers" Jeff muttered.

Jeff didn't want the problem of 2 Carries so he decided that he would have to turn his mother back but he also knew that he had to find a way to stop her from trying to make him unaware also. Ths is when the idea hit him.
Jeff began typing quickly...
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Currently After Change
Mind: Carrie Smith "Sherry Smith"
Orders: Freewill "Obedient"
Duration:10 minutes "Untill changed"

Type below any other traits the subject will have after the change:
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"Will retain the original personality of Sherry Smith to the most exact form yet be unable to not follow the orders of Jeff Smith and Jeff Smith only.
Also, the subject will not be able to use any computer system in any way."
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The tracking device found Sherry (Carrie) laying in the room beside Jeff. It displayed permission to start changes on this subject and Jeff clicked "Ok". There was a short zapping noise and 10 seconds later, Sherry came running into the room.

"What the heck happened?" Sherry breathed. "The last thing I remember was trying to make you come...shopping."

"I didn't want your mind Mom. And I dont want to come shopping either."

"Well what happened?"

"You made yourself unaware by accident I guess. You had Carrie's mind. I just convinced Carrie to go lay down in the other room and changed you back."

"Oh... thanks a lot Jeff. After what I did you still saved me."

"Well Mom I like having fun with you...and your sister isnt really that fun."

"Heh...You know what would be fun though?"

"What's that?"

"Going shopping with your sister!"

Sherry then pushed Jeff out of the way and made a beeline to the computer.

"Sherry STOP!"

Sherry stopped immedietly.

"Turn around and go lay down on the couch."

Just as Jeff said this, Sherry complied and laid on the couch.

"Wow I didnt think this would work"

"What have you done with me?" Sherry cried unable to move out of the laying position.

"I needed to make sure you wouldnt try to make me unaware again. SO, I made you obedient to me. Go to sleep I need to think."

Sherry's eyes closed and she went into a deep sleep.

"Wow I can't believe that I cant trust my own mother...but what can I do now? y things I could make Mom do. This is going to be fun."


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