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Chronivac Version 4.0

You look good enough to eat!

added by D 14 years ago I

Luke laughed, and strode over to the computer, and enlarged the video window that had inspired Aaron's current predicament. Then he tapped the mouse to start the image playing. The Axe Chocolate bodyspray commercial filled the screen. With unblinking chocolate eyes, Aaron could only watch as Luke came over to inspect his handiwork.

"Mmmm, Aaron, boy, I never thought I'd say this to a guy, but you smell great," Luke said licking and smacking his lips. His warm wet tongue lapped against Aaron's cheek, "Yum, I could just eat you up, Aaron!" Luke exclaimed.

Aaron felt Luke's tongue again rising up his cheek, but this time Luke's bottom teeth were shaving away a layer of Aaron's chocolate skin. Aaron felt pressure on on his hand as Luke's weigh pressed against him. There was a cracking sound, and his hand and part of his forearm fell to the floor.

"Whoa! Sorry, dude!" Luke said picking up Aaron's broken chocolate limb. He held up Aaron's arm so that the fingers touched Luke's mouth. He opened his mouth, and as Aaron watched immobilized, Luke shoved four fingers into his mouth, and chomped down hard. "Mmm, good!" Luke's hands, teeth and face were now smeared with chocolate, as he grinned at Aaron over the fingerless chocolate hand.

Luke set down the chocolate limb, and began licking his fingers clean. He then strolled over to the computer, and began to examine the online manual.

"I wonder if I can keep you immobilized, but make it so you can speak. I'd love to hear how it felt to be eaten alive. How it felt to be living chocolate...hey, maybe this will do it..." Luke spoke half to himself and half to Aaron as his fingers danced on the keyboard.


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