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Step 2: Revenge on Bobby's Ex

added 20 years ago AR AP

As Bobby began to search for his next victim, a name came to mind. Lynda. Lynda was his girlfriend during most of Freshman year but he broke up with her after he caught her cheating on him with a guy on the baseball team. And the best part was, he knew exactly where she was.

Meanwhile, Lynda was hurriedly finishing her homework so she could go see Josh. Tonight was his first game this season and she wanted to be there. She was so caught up in her work, that she didn't even notice Bobby climbing up the ladder of the old treehouse outside her window.

With an evil grin on his face, Bobby enetered the rickety old treehouse and prepared for his unseen assault. He looked one last time at Lynda, remembering the good times they had, and his ring began to glow once more.

Lynda was busy at work, so she didn't even notice the first effects of the ring. Her arms grew thin and veiny as black circles grew under her eyes. A streak of gray appeared in her hair, and another, and another. Her skin began to wrinkle as her hair became alsmot 50% gray. Feeling tired, she rose out of her seat and went to her mirror to brush her hair. At the sight of her own reflection, she gasped in horror. Right before her eyes her hair turned completely gray then white. Her skin wrinkled and drooped. Her breasts sagged and shrunk. Completely mortified, she watched as white whiskers grew on her chin and on her upper lip.

Bobby looked on from the treehouse with a sense of satisfaction. He had made her miserable beyond repair.

Suddenly, Josh, trhe baseball guy, burst into the room. Lynda turned away, crying. Josh, at first startled by her appearance, rushed to her side. To Bobby and Lynda's surprise, Josh brushed away Lynda's tears. He then kissed her with a surprising passion. She returned his sentiment and the two began to makeout.

Josh ripped of her clothes, revealing her old, wrinkled body. He continued to kiss her, rubbing his face against hers, which at this point had more hair than his.

It got even stranger as Bobby's ring began to glow again, this time a deep jade instead of the crimson it had been. As Bobby looked to the lovers once more, he became filled with confusion. Lynda's body began to change back to her original form. Her breasts regrew into B cups, her wrinkles disappeared as her body toned. The hairs on her chin and upper lip fell out. The only thing that didn't change was her hair. It remained white.

Josh, thrilled by her transformation back into her old self, proceeded to make love to her like he had never done before. Bobby refused to watch and left his perch.

The next morning at school, everyone complimented Lynda on how cool her hair was. When she passed Bobby in the hallway, he whispered, "You'll always be an old crone to me." She ignore dhim and went about her way.

A few months later she was happy to see her had grown out a little. The white had begun to grow back to gray which into turn grew into brown.

Bobby was never seen that day after the transformation, but some say there's an old man living in the school's basement. it would be wise not to disturb him, unless you'd like to wind up in a nursing home.


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