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Chronivac Version 4.0

Knowing When To Fold 'Em

added by Fitzroy Clement 11 years ago BM TG

"Oh crap. I-uh, oh god. Come on in."

Rain couldn't believe this. COULD. NOT. BELIEVE. THIS. Things were just starting to get interesting, and they
bring in their amazon lawyer?!

"Actually, I was wondering myself why you would have mind altering software in the first place" said Rain. "If
this got in the wrong hands, I think..."

"Mr. Davidson, I know. We've had frequent problems with people abusing the awareness function. We may have to
scrap that element of the program."

"As the old saying goes, power corrupts..." said Rain as she began to dismantle everything(unplugging the
emitter, packing up the CD, etc). She wasn't stupid and didn't want to get in trouble. She wasn't sure that
she could even physically fight this...tall beauty even if she wanted to.

Diana smiled. "You're taking this a lot better then most people, Mr. Davidson. Usually I have to fight people
and confiscate the Chronivac from them."

"So...when does this go on the market?" asked Rain

"It's planned to be released in three months, give or take a month."

Rain looked at Diana.

"So why was I chosen in the first place then?"

"It was totally random, Mr. Davidson."

"No, I mean, what was I chosen to test? If you already knew that people were potentially abusive towards
erasing people's memories and altering their lives unwillingly, why didn't I get a Chronivac without such
flaws?"

Diana gulped a little. "You'd have to speak with one of my supervisors or examine the Chronivac website when
it's ready to go public.

Rain nodded.

"OK. So here you are, Miss" she said, handing Rain the box full of equipment. "There's a few people out on the
road who I changed too, you know."

"Already taken care of. Your roommates, as well as Dan's drinking partner, are already back to their default
states, Mr. Davidson."

"And those two over there-"

Diana looked at Mr. Smith and Mr. Protaras who were standing in the doorway, the former now a petite redhead
and the latter a tall Native American girl who's morphing has just been completed.

"Why yes, I can take care of them right now--"


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