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Transform or Dare?

Jen goes through the other side of the Gate

added 11 years ago O

... the first mirror she sees. "Well," she thought to herself "here goes nothing!"

So she jumped through, and found herself standing at a tall gate with gold decorations on
it.

When it opened, all she saw was darkness, and thousands of evil-looking eyes peering
from it!

"I don't know how you got here," she herd a child's voice say to her "but you'll be sorry for
coming, Jennifer Smith!"

"How do you know my name?" she asked, very sorry already!

"I know all about you - the OTHER you, that is!"

"The other me?" she asked "Wait, who are YOU?"

"I am Truth." the voice replied "This is MY gate!"

"Where are you?" she asked.

"Since you asked," Truth said "I'll give you a form to see."

She saw a pair of eyes in the dark with a mouth below.

He came half-way out - he looked like a child's shadow with two eyes and a mouth.

"Are you satisfied now?" he asked.

"It's better than nothing," she said, a bit scared "but who are THEY?"

"They are my brothers and sisters who live inside My Gate with me. Now to business,
you've seen too much Jennifer, so now you must die!"

"Nooo!" she begged "Please don't. It's not fair - I never meant to come here and-"

"OF COURSE IT'S FAIR!!" he roared "Don't you know ANYTHING about Equivalent-Exchange?
To obtain, something of equal value must first be lost, but oh .. wait .. I forgot - you're
from Earth - not Amestris, are you? Hmmm...... well I suppose I could let you pass through
to the other side, but you'd have to give something up."

"Like what?" she asked fearfully.

"I'll decide that." he said, as he grabbed her with his long, shadowy, child-like hands "You
should be grateful I'm letting you live at all!" and before she could say another word, she
was sucked in!

When she woke up, she found she was ......

(Author's note: keep in mind this takes place in today's time, so the characters from the
Full Metal Alchemist Series wouldn't be here, but their descendants would be.)


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