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Is the Changing Irreversible?

added by Unnamed 9 years ago O

Lilia helped Andy to their room, where she made him lay down on the bed.

His pain was growing with etch passing seconds. For now it was still contained within his stomach, but will soon expand to other parts of Andy's body. His girlfriend needed to act fast!

Trying vainly to put her fear out of her voice, Lilia started to explain the situation to her boyfriend. "Andy! Andy, I know you're terribly in pain right-now, but I need you to listen to me. That vial you drank, it was a potion of some sort. Thanks to it a mermaid can become human for 24hrs. Alas, that humanity-serum is highly toxic to true humans." Tears started flowing on her cheeks. "If we are lucky enough, I may be able to prevent any lasting effect on your body if I act NOW. But for that I need an object, something deeply personal to you. The more personal it is, the better."

Hearing that last information, Andy tried to grab his old bracelet, resting on his nightstand. But with his convulsing body, he was barely able to point to it.

Lilia remembered that old thing. Andy often told her his grand-father had made it himself. If it wasn't made of stainless steel, you would think the old man was a jeweler.

And being the only memento of his grand-father, it was the perfect object to save Andy. "Perfect!" Exclaimed his girlfriend.

She then started to chant incantations of some sort. Soon, the serum's victim started to glow. A a wire made of light grew out of Andy's glowing, until it connected with his old bracelet. When Lilia singing finally stooped, the glow receded, revealing Andy's fate.


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