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Too Good to be True

added 19 years ago BM

Beth took a step backwards. She had already been the victim of one witch today. "Reward me?"

Princess Patience chuckled softly. "You're looking at me like I'm going to turn you back into a frog. Don't worry. I want to give you something for releasing me. You seemed disappointed for some reason a couple of minutes ago."

"Well, yes," Beth replied. "Kinda. It's my body. I'm so plain! I'm short and I've got no breasts. My face is all freckles and my hair gets all stringy when I let it grow. I'm a seventeen year old year girl but I look more like a ten year old boy. Guys never notice me. And for a moment there, before I was turned into a frog, I was made beautiful."

"That is what you want?" Patience asked. "For males to notice you?"

"Well, yeah," answered Beth. "Is something wrong?"

"No," Patience said. "Tell me what you want to look like. I will make sure you are noticed from now on."

"Okay!" Beth said with a grin. "I want to be taller and fair skinned. Lose the freckles. And breasts, big but not too big. Long blond hair that grows nice and straight. And some curves to my hips. A little bit of butt, but not too much. Longer legs and..."

"I think I have the idea," said Patience, not living up to her name.

She gestured and Beth felt herself expand and reshape. A moment later Beth looked down at herself to see her body filled out the gown very differently than before. And her long golden blond hair now swept down to her waist. "Wow, this is fantastic! I can't thank you enough. But what are you going to do now?"

"I do not know," Patience replied. "The world has changed much. But I will find something for myself. Farewell."

"Wait, why don't you...?" Beth looked up, but Patience had disappeared. "She's gone. I guess I should get home. I wonder how I'm going to explain changing so much. Mom said I was a late bloomer. I guess I'll tell her I bloomed all at once. Hey, something feels... odd." Checking, Beth was shocked to discover...


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