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Janet in Wonderland: Getting Off Easy, For Now

"Fascinating, very fascinating indeed. Now then Janet who also goes by Alice, I want you to stop curtseying me and stand like a proper maid." Ms. Chair ordered Janet.
Janet let go of her skirt and held her hands together in front of her. Deep down, Janet worried what Ms. Chair would do to her next. For because of her extremely polite Alice personality, Janet was now forced to obey everything Ms. Chair told her. Ms. Chair then spoke again.
"Well now Janet who also goes by Alice, it seems that you are under my complete control. Aren't you?"
"Yes ma'am. I am forced to obey you ma'am." Janet responded, wishing she hadn't said that.
"Indeed you are. And do you know why that is?"
"No ma'am. I do not ma'am."
"Because I am a lady. And I assume you were unaware of that fact?" Lady Chair asked.
"Yes ma'am. I was unaware of your status as a lady ma'am."
"And yet you still obeyed me?"
Yes ma'am."
"Then you are not as rude as I was lead to believe. You have demonstrated just how polite you truly are and I am very impressed."
Janet smiled a bit after Lady Chair told her all that. Being told that she was polite had made Janet feel really good about herself and the position she was now in.
"Thank you ma'am. I am truly grateful for the complement ma'am. And I am very sorry about all the trouble I've caused you ma'am."
"Oh think nothing of it. I'm just glad to be treated with any form of respect again. You may go now, but try to be a bit more courteous to your surroundings next time."
"Yes ma'am. Thank you ma'am. And I will ma'am." Janet said as she politely walked away from Lady Chair.

Once Janet was far enough away from Lady Chair, she layed next to a nearby wall and sat on the floor with her legs tucked underneath her. Janet breathed heavily as she recovered from her ordeal.
"{catches breath} My ... My goodness. That was very peculiar of me. I've never felt so powerless in my life. It hadn't occurred to me that being Alice would leave me so vulnerable like that. Oh dear, once again I am cursed with a lack of foresight."
Janet remained like this for about a minute. When Janet finally calmed down, she then admitted something to herself.
"Although as much as I initially disliked it, I kind of liked having to obey every order given to me. It made being Alice that much more exciting and unpredictable. Even now I still feel compelled to obey Lady Chair's last command. And it also felt rather nice to be told that I was good and polite. It all makes me want to keep going and see what else will happen to me."


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