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Your girlfriend goes first

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"Oh, me first!" says your girlfriend. She presses a red button next to the doors of the giant transformation chamber and the doors open like it was a giant elevator. The floor of the chamber glows dimly as does the ceiling. Besides the glowing floor and ceiling the rest of the chamber appears to be made of flat sheet metal. You both notice what appears to be a control panel on the inside of the chamber opposite the doors.

Looking at the giant machine with a feeling of trepidation, you say, "Maybe we should read the instructions fir-"

"You wait here." says you girlfriend, cutting you off. "I want this to be a surprise for you." She smiles and skips over to the control panel.

"Um, okay," you reply, feeling a little curious and slightly nervous about what she has planned.

After looking at the control panel for a few seconds, she declares, "All right, this is easy." She hits a few buttons and then the doors to the chamber slide shut again.

The chamber then begins to hum like an electrical transformer. The whole room rumbles slightly as the sound grows rapidly louder. Around the edges of the doors to the chamber, you see a bright light shining out that soon grows brighter and brighter as the hum becomes louder and louder. You watch all of this happening feeling slightly worried. Although you trust this resort, you can't help but feel a little scared by the immense power of the machine that you girlfriend is inside now.

Then, suddenly, the light goes out and the hum fades away. You stand there staring at the door, gripped with anticipation. How can you help but wonder what has just happened to your girlfriend?

With a loud hiss, the doors slide open again. A thick white mist lit dimly by the lights on the floor and ceiling drifts out of the machine, completely obscuring the inside.

Feeling nervous, you walk up to the machine and say to the mist, "Are you okay in there?"

The mist clears and you see...


What do you do now?


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